(3) 强调句。如：

【原】Ah Fu had saved my little sister bravely.

【改】It was brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

(4) 分词短语。如：

【原】Many teenagers sit at their computers all day long and watch their favorite TV shows.

【改】Many teenagers sit at their computers all day long, watching their favorite TV shows.

(5) 由with或without引导的短语。如：

He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

(6) 对比。如：

When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed.

(7) there be结构。如：

【原】People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food．

【改】There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food．

四、巧用各类从句

使用定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句等各类从句

(1)名词性从句。如：

【原】We had to stand there to catch the offender. (from www.nmet168.com)

【改】What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

(2)定语从句。如：

【原】My aunt bought me a book. The title of the book is All about The USA.

【改】My aunt bought me a book, whose title is All about The USA.

此外，还需要注意长短句交替使用，体现表达节奏美。

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