三、实例讲解

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下面是一段对话。假如你就是其中的M。请根据对话内容，用第一人称的形式写一篇短文，说明自己受伤、进医院、缺课的经过。要求交代清楚具体的时间和地点。

W：Why didn’t you go to school yesterday?

M：I didn’t, but I went to the hospital instead.

W：What happened to you?

M：I was going to school together with Li Ming when suddenly a motor-bike ran into me and I fell down the ground. I was seriously hurt in the left leg and could hardly stand up.

W：What happened later on?

M：Well, Li Ming stopped a taxi and took me to the hospital. There the doctor told me that I had to stay in the hospital for some time. Then Li Ming telephoned my parents and told them what had happened.

W：Did Li Ming go to school?

M：Yes, he did. But I’m afraid he must have been late for class because he left the hospital at eight o’clock. But I had to stay in the hospital for a whole day before I went home in the evening with my parents. Luckily I can walk as well as before.

W：I’m glad to hear that you are as well as before.

M：Thank you.

解题指导：通过审题，我们可以看出，本题要求考生根据所给的这段对话材料写一篇短文。要求考生以第一人称的形式改写，并且规定了文章的某些具体的内容。

细读材料后，我们可以发现这段对话主要讲述的是一件“我”在上学路上被车撞了后住进医院的事情。在把握文章大意后，我们可以考虑其用词和句型。在改写这段对话时，下面这些词语或句型可能会用到：on one’s way to, knock off, as a result, hurt sb in the leg, ring sb up, not…until等。(from www.nmet168.com)

范文：

Yesterday morning I was going to school on foot together with Li Ming. We were talking and laughing happily on the way when a motor-bike knocked me off my bike. As a result, I was seriously hurt in the left leg and could hardly stand up. Seeing this, Li Ming jumped off his bike, put it aside, stopped a taxi and took me to the hospital at once. In the hospital, a doctor gave me a quick examination. I was told that I had to stay there for some time. So Li Ming went out and rang up my parents. He told them what had happened to me in the street. He didn’t leave the hospital until my parents arrived. I stayed in the hospital for a whole day until later in the afternoon. Luckily, I can walk as well as before now. I must thank Li Ming for his help.

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