以上这些句子虽然都比较复杂，使用了复合句，并列句等，但是完全可以简化：如下：

(1) He didn’t do the work well for lack of experience.

(2) The captain, a tall, thin man with a big mustache, was pacing the bridge with a look of importance.

(3)It was at 5 o’clock in the afternoon, the rush hour of the day’s traffic, that the car accident took place.

(4) He wants to make a tour of the People’s Square, a fine, open space in the center of the city. (from www.nmet168.com)

因此，在写作中，我们应注意适时适量使用“较复杂结构或较高级词汇”，不要刻意追求“复杂”而忽视了“准确”和“得体”，而应在有把握的前提下适时运用。如能运用好，定能为自己的文章“锦上添花”，赢得阅卷老师的好评！

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