短文改错之错词考点分析

错词原因很多，归纳起来，有以下几个方面：

1.  时态、语态误用

例1  The time passes quickly.

分析：原文讲的是上周游览峨眉山，故将passes改为passed。

例2  Books must be keep for four weeks.

分析：根据句意，该句为被动语态，故将keep改为kept。

2. 非谓语动词误用

例1  I was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort.

分析：and并列结构之后缺少一个主语，故将watch改为watching。

3.  主谓是否一致、主语和代词是否一致

例1  Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.

分析：句中my picture and the prize为并列主语，谓语动词应用复数形式，故将is改为are。

例2  The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.

分析：句子的主语为复数，与之相应的人称代词his应改为their。

4. 形容词和副词(比较等级)的误用

    例1  As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.

分析：longer本身即构成比较级，故将more去掉。

例2  After learning the basic of the subject, nothing else seemed very practically to me.

分析：连系动词后要用形容词，故将practically改为practical。

5. 连接词的误用

例1  The food was expensive and the service was good.

分析：the food was expensive与the service was good 是转折关系，不是并列关系，故应将and改为but。

例2  I told Mother, Father, Sister and all my friends that a great time I had.

分析：此句中含一个感叹句作told的宾语，故应将that改为what才正确。

6. 思维定势的干扰

例  I also enjoyed the evening when we spent together.

分析：尽管evening是时间名词，但是spend是及物动词，需要关系代词作宾语，故应将when改为which / that, 或者将when去掉。

7. 句式结构中平行、并列关系混乱

例1  It was very kind of you to meet me at the railway station and drove me to your home.

分析：句中drove应改为drive, 才能与前面的to meet保持平行并列关系。

例2  As we climbed the mountains, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.

分析：句中用了三个并列的谓语动词，故应将visiting改为visited。

8. 行文逻辑错误

例1  Now someone at home reads instead.

分析：根据上文可知，电视机卖掉以后全家人都看书，故应someone 改为 everyone。